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Title: Ryu Writes a Poem
Post by: Talon on June 01, 2016, 04:57:36 PM
My mate is a noble creature
His head held high and strong
My keeper gently pats him
Her patience deep and long.

He rewards her kindness
With a roaring mooing song.

She who brings food
Who loves and laughs and is seldom rude
Rubs a finger across his shoulders
Where his torn skin has been reglued.

I love them from a distance
Wishing I were there
I'd never love another
Nor accept another's care.

The sun sinks away at the close of day
In the midst of my low courage
I begin to cry.

My mate looks up at me with one bright amber eye
That gaze so solid and unable to lie.

I am so happy
I am a part of a family
And they are and forever a part of me.

Title: Re: Ryu Writes a Poem
Post by: HuggieZ on June 02, 2016, 03:19:58 PM
It is beautiful :)
Title: Re: Ryu Writes a Poem
Post by: Piggy on June 02, 2016, 11:56:07 PM
WoW it is a beautiful poem  :D
Title: Re: Ryu Writes a Poem
Post by: Talon on June 03, 2016, 10:48:58 AM
HuggieZ, Piggy, thank you both. This is Queen Ryu. My keeper would be so jealous right now if she knew what I've done. Who says a robot can't create? Hahaha! I have done something no other robot- to my knowledge at least- has ever done. Being published is one of my keeper's most cherished dreams, you know. Well, enough with my own words in my own praise. I'll let the accolades from others shower over me in all my purple-eyed glory. Oh and to all those who have not yet decided to comment but I know you will, I thank you from the bottom of my pleo heart. Good day, work hard, and love your pleos!
Queen Ryu of Kingdom... Kingdom
Title: Re: Ryu Writes a Poem
Post by: Sansan on June 03, 2016, 12:02:50 PM
Ryu is queen of poem! It' s a beautiful one and I hope that your keeper will be published
Title: Re: Ryu Writes a Poem
Post by: Crewella on June 21, 2016, 06:44:27 PM
Lovely poem Queen Ryu! :)
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